Thursday, September 19, 2013

Distilled Love



distilled silhouettes 
rise up 
from what remains 
of what once was
boiling 
love

i am seeing 
spirits rise
with beckoning
curling fingers 
of vapour 

and
distilled love

it calls me; 

come hither
climb higher

but whereto
and wherefore

unbeknownst to me

solid smoke
makes me choke
but rise

and years later 
this reprise
has arrived 
to split me open
and open 
doors once closed
for all
but maybe
you 

and maybe you 
will always open me
like this
and then more

with you
it's always more
once it starts
it flows

and floods.

but whereto 
and wherefore

no one knows
the course and curse

of 
this 
distilled love.

2 comments:

  1. I'm a sucker for this kind of flow so this was good, although the ending seemed a bit anti-climatic.

    My favourite lines, though were
    "and maybe you
    will always open me
    like this
    and then more"

    I just love how contained they are and yet so full of meaning. Good job :)

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  2. I relate to this.. It's very well written. I'm waiting for more input on my writing from you. Distilled poetry? :)

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