distilled silhouettes
rise up
from what remains
of what once was
boiling
love
i am seeing
spirits rise
with beckoning
curling fingers
of vapour
and
and
distilled love
it calls me;
come hither
climb higher
but whereto
and wherefore
unbeknownst to me
solid smoke
makes me choke
but rise
and years later
this reprise
has arrived
to split me open
and open
doors once closed
for all
but maybe
you
and maybe you
will always open me
like this
and then more
and then more
with you
it's always more
it's always more
once it starts
it flows
and floods.
but whereto
and wherefore
no one knows
the course and curse
of
this
distilled love.
this
distilled love.
I'm a sucker for this kind of flow so this was good, although the ending seemed a bit anti-climatic.
ReplyDeleteMy favourite lines, though were
"and maybe you
will always open me
like this
and then more"
I just love how contained they are and yet so full of meaning. Good job :)
I relate to this.. It's very well written. I'm waiting for more input on my writing from you. Distilled poetry? :)
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